雅思写作中地图题要怎么写?以剑12的真题为例来分析一下

2019-08-23 15:28:21来源:网络作者: 小梦阅读量:

  在雅思写作中,剑12雅思真题中有很多的地图题,这一类的题目其实难度并不是很大,而且结构也相对来说比较规矩,和其他数据图表比较起来还是很容易的,所以我们在做题的时候只要把握方法,就能写出好的文章来,下面我们就一起从剑12范文里面来分析一下雅思写作的地图题。

  The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

雅思写作中地图题要怎么写?以剑12的真题为例来分析一下

  范文解析:

  The two maps of the center of the towns of Iship give information about the city currently and in the future. Overall, a lot of modifications can be observed during the forecast development.

  解析1:地图题的首段主要是交代写作目的如比较一个地方不同时间的差别等。简单一句话概括。

  First of all, according to the current map the center is close to a countryside. A main road deserves houses, a school, several shops and a park.

  解析2:纠正一下countryside是不可数,要去掉不定冠词a;第二个错误就是deserve的用法也是有误的。第一张图的信息比较简单,所以这一段简单地进行了总结性的描述,也是为了避免和下文的内容重复,但是这段的内容还可以更为详细一些,补充一些方位的内容。

  Looking more closely at the map predicting the future development of the city, a lot of modifications can be observed. The size of the center will increase in an oval shape; therefore the countryside will disappear. Moreover, the single road will be replaced by a bigger dual carriageway. A pedestrian way will deserve the central area. New housed will be built with new facilities such as a bus station and a parking. The shops will be grouped in a shopping mall. The next point is the garden area which will be smaller. As the city will have more people the school will be bigger.

 

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