哪些雅思写作开头是不受老师喜欢?这些你都有过吗?

2019-08-08 18:16:54来源:网络作者: 小梦阅读量:

  哪些雅思写作开头是不受老师喜欢的呢?我们都说在应试的考试中,作文最重要的就是开头要吸引人,除此之外字迹的工整也是非常重要的,但是如果你的开头恰恰写的很糟糕,那自然是拿不到分数,下面是一些不讨喜的雅思作文开头,一起来了解一下。

哪些雅思写作开头是不受老师喜欢?这些你都有过吗?
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  1、中式英语

  用中式英文开头,不仅会让考官看不懂,还暴露了你的语言功底,语料积累匮乏,是雅思写作中的大忌。比如:

  写作主题:The happiest moment in your life

  案例:In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…

  写作主题:The population problem

  案例:The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

  2、胡乱翻译中国俗语

  胡乱翻译中国俗语会起反作用,毕竟考官对中国俗语并不“感冒”,使用不慎,更会引起考官反感。比如:

  写作主题:Is it good to have a large family?

  案例:I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”…

  写作主题:Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

  案例:Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole…

 

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