雅思机经:年7月6日雅思写作考试权威点评!

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  想要参加雅思考试的学生注意了,本期环球教育为各位考生分享刚刚过去的雅思考试的真题解析分享,下面一起来看看环球教育苏州分校王泽玥老师对于写作的一些点评,赶快来看看吧!

  A类小作文

  【作文类型】柱状图(动态)

  【作文题目】The chart below shows the percentage of the whole population in four countries from 1950 to 2002, with projections to 2050.

雅思机经:年7月6日雅思写作考试权威点评!

  【综合点评】动态柱状图。关于世界各国的人口百分比的变化(印度,中国,美国,日本)。考生需要注意动态图的变化用词和表达,以及时间改变的不同时态区分。

  A类大作文

  【作文题目】Research says that more and more business training and meetings take place online. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

  【题目分析】advantage/disadvantage类题型。科技类话题本年度出现了三次,本次为第四次。该类型属于常规话题之一,也是平时练习和经常讲解的话题。需要注意将科技结合工作类型的表达,包括员工和产能的相关短语。

  【题材类别】科技和工作

  【参考范文】

  Online meetings and training have gradually become a trend of business with the facilitation of technology. While class teaching brings certain benefits, I assert that merits of distant programs are irreplaceable in the business world.

  In a company, since the frequency of business conferences is always changing in order to coordinate with the process of various projects, it is less probable to gather all engaged members and conduct a meeting simultaneously. Instead, electronics such as online conferencing software could transcend geographical barrier no matter how distant the employees are, contributing to an efficient communication of idea exchange. Hence, it is the flexibility of cyber meetings that caters for both employees and superiors.

  On top of the effectiveness brought by online meetings, training programs via internet is also favorable ascribed to a relatively lower expense. In other words, not only does it reduce the cost of transportation for learners as there is no need to assemble, but also the

  investment on facilities for trainers when holding a gym class. Besides, compared with conventional method of training curricula, international corporations can adopt online platforms if authoritative professionals are invited to impart knowledge and skills, which benefits employees in a worldwide scale.

  Undeniably, gathering of team partners can enhance the cohesion and cultivate team spirit in a company, through which better results can be achieved thanks to face-to-face communication. What is more, one indispensable benefit of traditional training is that interactions between classmates and trainers are so intimate that prompt feedbacks and close relationships would be realized.

  In a word, there are certain pros and cons of implementing online meetings in comparison with traditional method. It should be emphasized that the advent of this new type always functions as a supplement in order to satisfy the requirement of different groups.

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