环球教育：2019年01月12日雅思写作考试权威点评！

　　每一期雅思考试结束后，环球教育的老师都会为考生们权威点评考试试题，下面环小羊为大家整理分享环球教育优秀教师高瑾老师为大家分析的2019年01月12日雅思写作考试权威点评，考生们可以查看一下往期试题的考核模式，可以与去年同时期对比一下，看一下试题的变化，希望可以帮到大家~

　　A类小作文

　　【作文类型】饼状图

　　【作文题目】: The pie charts show percentages of females and males working in private and government organizations.

　　四个饼图的静态图，描述的是男女在私企和国企工作时间的比较。

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　　【作文图片】数据仅供参考

　　【综合点评】 常规静态图。需要注意段落划分，可以以性别为分段依据。静态图需要重点描述数据之间的对比关系，相同性别在不同公司中工作时间长短的对比，以及相同公司中不同性别的员工工作时间的对比。写对比内容时，可以用unlike，while，in comparison with几种不同的句型展开，避免表达重复。

　　A类大作文

　　【作文题目】When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　【题目分析】观点题。今天的题目也是一道常规的雅思写作题目，之前的考试也重复出现过类似的话题，比较公园/运动场和购物中心的重要性。大家可以选取任何一方，陈述2~3个理由，注意要给出比较具体的解释和例子。

　　【题材类别】社会类

　　【参考范文】

　　When planning a new town, the authorities have various factors to consider and need to prioritize the construction of different facilities. To encourage active lifestyles, in my opinion, it is more important to build public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers.

　　Providing sports facilities is an effective way to improve city dwellers’ health, and thus reduce the government budget for medical expenses in the long term. In this day and age, many people live a sedentary lifestyle, choosing to watch TV or play video games after work, and collapsing in front of the screen every evening. With easy access to various kinds of sport facilities, they are more likely to make exercise a regular part of their lives.

　　The park is also a good place for exercise, particularly to those who are not interested in competitive sports. Jogging, dancing and part practicing Tai Chi in the park are quite common among elderly citizens these days. In the park with high greening rate plants, and trees can absorb waste gases, and provide green shade, creating a comfortable environment for city dwellers. Those who spend leisure time in the park can have closed contact with nature and make themselves refreshed.

　　By contrast, the main function of shopping centers is for people to buy various goods, but in today’s world where online shopping is becoming increasingly prevalent, the role of physical stores seems to be weakened. Large shopping centers can also include some leisure facilities, such as cafes and cinemas, but these are not as important as parks and sports centers.

　　To conclude, in the process of urban planning and construction, building parks and sports facilities should be emphasized, in comparison to developing shopping centers.

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