环球教育分享：2019年7月20日雅思写作考试权威点评！

　　2019年7月20日的雅思考试已经结束，考生们都考的怎么样呢?很多学生应该都想要知道本次考试的难易程度，下面上名校小编为大家整理分享环球优秀教师杨俊麟老师为大家做的7月20日雅思考试写作的点评分析，考生们可以参考一下!

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　　环球教育苏州分校 杨俊麟

　　A类小作文

　　[作文类型] 柱状图 组合

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　　[作文题目] People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives，but few people achieve it. What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?

　　[题目分析]报告类题目，依次给出存在的问题和解决方案

　　[题材类别] 生活类

　　[思路分析]话题给出了一个背景现象：人们尝试保持工作和生活(other parts of their lives除工作以外的部分)之间的平衡。。考生需要依次回答两个问题，一是保持工作生活的平衡有哪些困难，二是要给出解决这些问题的方案。提出的方案一定要呼应先前提及到的困难。

　　在遇到的困难方面：生存压力(如房价物价、医疗养老)和工作压力(如公司业绩、加班)致使人们为了努力挣钱而加班，忽视了家人和自身健康

　　针对这些问题的解决方案可以从企业和政府层面展开：企业方面可以减轻工作压力，多给业余时间或假期。政府方面可以建立更好的社会保障(如医疗、养老、住房)，从而减轻生存压力，进而使人们更加容易实现工作和生活的平衡

　　[参考范文]

　　It is true that a balanced relation between work and life can hardly be maintained as far as most people are concerned nowadays. There are various relevant reasons for this, but measures can sure be utilized to assist people get closer to the goal.

　　From my point of view, two major problems can be seen in balancing work and life. Firstly, survival pressure is obviously getting increasingly heavier. People are facing unprecedentedly high living expenditure, such as housing price and daily expenses, if they reside in cities. Costs such as potential medical expenses or educational costs, if possible, for their kids for themselves are also adding more burden. Secondly, companies that people work for may also increase their sense of stress. Some enterprises may, whether or not deliberately, exploit employees’ leisure time by assigning more compulsory tasks that there is little time can be given for enjoying lives. Thus, with pressure of survival and work, people might not only forget keeping a healthy physical condition but must also sacrifice the time belonging to their family and themselves for extra work.

　　However, it is not impossible to achieve a work-life equilibrium. Companies could play a crucial role in helping people to acquire the balance by reducing extra workload, which is a critical part that forces people to trade their time for working, or giving more chances for vocations. If more time was given to employees, they would have an opportunity for fulfilling other parts of their lives. Moreover, governments need to take responsibilities in terms of establishing a better social welfare system---which include a more affordable medical care, education and pension system---so that people could have a higher capacity to withstand risks in life.

　　In conclusion, remaining a balance among work and life is still difficult for people today, whereas companies and governments can definitely dedicate to aid.