2021年12月4日托福独立写作回忆和解析含范文

　　2021年12月4日托福独立写作回忆和解析含范文   本文由环球教育成都学校李丹老师整理提供，对于本次写作的综合点评：这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中。其中，综合写作考查天文类，整体难度中等偏上。

　　独立写作考查友谊类话题，重复2021.11.14原题，虽然有点抽象，但是还是一道比较好写的题目，建议考生在备考过程中尽量多积累一些话题相关素材，更能沉着应对各类话题考试。

　　独立写作

　　话题分类友谊类

　　考题回忆Some people believe that friendships become stronger when friends enjoy good times together. Others believe that friendships become stronger when friends talk about their problems with each other and support each other. Which of these two approaches do you feel is most useful in helping make a friendship stronger? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　解题思路立场：同意第二个观点

　　原因：

　　1. 患难见真情，在困难中能够支持的朋友更加真诚相待，从而更有助于维持长期友谊

　　2. 因为对方的支持而感恩，如果以后对方遇到问题，自己也会更加乐于去帮助朋友度过难关，从而形成长久的友谊，甚至成为一生的朋友

　　第一个观点

　　让步：

　　1. 一起度过开心的时光属于朋友之间快乐的分享，能够增加彼此在一起的快乐回忆

　　2. 有助于培养共同的兴趣爱好，以助于以后的关系发展

　　反驳：

　　但是，朋友之间友谊的增强更多的是看朋友在我们心中留下的印记，那些能够在困难的时候彼此支持，相互扶持走出阴霾的朋友一定比只是可以和彼此开心玩耍的朋友更加能够给到彼此更多的心灵慰藉，从而更加能够增进长久的友谊

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　　Throughout people’s whole life, they may encounter many people and subsequently become friends with each other. Since friendship is one of the most valuable things in our life, we would all cherish these friends. But which approach is the most useful in helping making a friendship stronger? Some people contend enjoying good times together, whereas others point out that talking problems and supporting each other is more effective. Personally, I believe support is of vital significance to maintain a stronger friendship, and people should always try their utmost to help their friends to get through their difficulties.

　　There are two main reasons. First of all, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Those who can talk about problems with each other and support each other must be the most honest ones. With their company, it can be easier for us to pluck up the courage to deal with the misery in life, whether emotional or financial distress, thus contributing to a lifelong friendship. Additionally, people may feel grateful due to friends’ assistance, so if these friends encounter problems in their life, we would be more likely to help and support them, which can form a virtuous circle and is conducive to enhance the relationship with friends.

　　Admittedly, enjoying good times together is also another contributing factor. This is mainly because this period of time can also be seen as an opportunity for people to share, and this experience give each other happy memories. At the same time, spending good time together can also play a positive role in helping people to nurturing some common interests, which is also an important factor for friendship. However, it is only those assisting us who can leave a deep impression in our memories. Compared with those only having fun together, the friends we talk to when we have difficulties in life and those who support us always can give us more comfort and courage. This memory is enduring and even can last for our whole life. That is why I firmly believe talking problems with each other can be the most effective to strengthen the bond between friends.

　　To sum up, although spending good time with each other can benefit the relationship with friends, getting through difficulties with each other is a more useful method for a closer, stronger and even more lasting friendship.