2021年11月14日托福综合写作回忆和解析含范文！

　　2021年11月14日托福写作回忆和解析含范文！本文由环球教育成都学校李丹老师整理分享。综合点评：这次托福考试写作部分整体比较简单。

　　其中，综合写作考查教育类，整体难度适中。

　　独立写作考查友谊类话题，虽然有点抽象，但是还是一道比较好写的题目，建议考生在备考过程中尽量多积累一些话题相关素材，更能沉着应对各类话题考试。

　　综合写作

　　话题分类教育类

　　考题回忆总论点elementary school音乐教育是否值得

　　阅读部分认为不值得：

　　1. 学生要节约时间学数学和语言

　　2. 学校没钱雇老师和买乐器

　　3. 很多学生不成为音乐家，即使想成为音乐家，学校教育也不够

　　听力部分反驳：

　　1. 音乐有助于学习数学，音乐里面音符能助于学生学fraction，学音乐能让学生了解不同声音不同含义，有助于学习语言

　　2. 学校可以雇佣退休老师，免费。还可以租乐器给学生，赚点钱

　　3. 音乐教育让学生拥有欣赏音乐的能力

　　解题思路传统四段式写作，每一段阅读内容+听力内容，注意细节和同义替换

　　参考范文Both the reading and the lecture are talking about whether music education is worthy at elementary school. The author of the reading claims that there is no need to involve it, while the lecturer challenges this perspective by providing tree reasons.

　　The reading first claims that at primary stage, students need time to study mathematics and languages. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that music is beneficial to math, because the note can help pupils learn fraction. Also, music can help students learn different meanings of different sounds, which is helpful for learning languages as well.

　　Secondly, the reading passage conceives that students lack the money to employ teachers and buy musical instruments. The listening, by contrast, says that schools can hire retired teachers, which is free. Besides that, they can also rent instruments to students and can even make money through this method.

　　In the final analysis, the writer in the reading asserts that many students just do not want to become musicians, and even if they want to be musicians, school education is not enough. The professor in the lecture points out that despite that, music education can make students have the ability to appreciate music, which is also very important for primary students.

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