2021年9月5日托福写作【独立写作】回忆和解析含范文！

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　　综合点评

　　这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中，独立写作重复2021.5.22考题，是经常出现的一个题目。

　　其中，综合写作考查动物环境类，整体难度适中。

　　独立写作

　　话题分类教育类和国家发展类

　　考题回忆Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

　　解题思路重复2021年5月22日的考试

　　写作思路：

　　要点：同意或者反对都可以。选择同意的一方，就写improving schools 的优点，对于国家的successful development有什么贡献。比如原因一教育是国家发展的基石。九年义务教育和高中教育为学生提供基本的社会生存必备知识技能。原因二是高等教育为国家选拔人才，对国家长足发展和创新科技提供支持。然后加一个让步转折段，写一个国家的成功发展是由多方面因素相辅相成的，但是基于上述讲到的优点，还是觉得improving schools 是最重要的因素。选择反对的一方就两个原因段写其他因素对国家成功发展更加重要，再加一个让步转折段说improving schools很重要，但不是最重要的。

　　观点：同意

　　1. Education is the foundation of a country. Compulsory education and high school education provide basic knowledge for students.

　　（1）九年义务教育和高中教育为学生提供基本的社会生存必备知识技能，比如语数外政史地和理化生的基础知识, 以及美术音乐体育等强身健体和美学欣赏的全面发展。

　　2. Higher education selects professional talents for the country, providing support for the sustainable and successful development as well as the innovative technology

　　（1）高等教育为国家选拔人才，对国家长足发展和创新科技提供支持，比如语言学、教育学、国际贸易、金融、IT、汽车制造等专业学习.

　　3.让步转折的结尾段

　　一个国家的成功发展是由多方面因素相辅相成的，比如经济发展、外交关系、自然因素、科学技术等，但是基于上述讲到的优点，还是觉得improving schools 是最重要的因素。

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　　Nowadays, every country is considering how to successfully develop their country and gain better international status. There are many factors influencing the successful development of a country. Some people believe that education is the most important element, while others believe that there are other more crucial factors. From my perspective, I do insist that education is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

　　Education is the foundation of a country. Compulsory education and high school education provide basic knowledge for students. Primary school and junior high school students are able to learn basic Math, Chinese, English, politics, history, geography, physics, chemistry and biology. These subjects provide basic skills for students to understand the function and the blueprint of the world. And they are able to survive in the world by learning how to communicate with others, calculate numbers, bargain with shop owners and discuss the national politics and history with family and friends. As Bacon said, Histories make men wise; poets witty; the mathematics subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend. Students will not only learn these knowledge but also learn music, arts and sports. Besides, music cultivates their aesthetic values and sports strengthen their bodies. Fundamentally, the country is consisted of citizens so that successful education for young students contributes to the successful development of a country.

　　Higher education selects professional talents for the country, providing support for the sustainable and successful development as well as the innovative technology. In order for the country to develop successfully, the government must progress technology innovation. And the innovation largely initiates from higher education experiment, laboratory and library. Many prestigious universities receive a large amount of money from the government every year for the purpose of cultivating talents and progressing majors. Take different majors as examples, language majors foster future teachers, interpreters and diplomatists for the country. Mathematics train future scientists and statistic analysts for the society. Financing majors cultivate businessmen, investors and entrepreneurs for future development of a country. Internet technology majors cultivate programmers for companies and the society. These professional talents coming from the higher education contribute a lot to the success of a country in turn.

　　Admittedly, a successful development of a country is composed of various elements, such as economic development, diplomatic relations, natural elements and technological skills. However, based on the reasons and examples mentioned above, I still believe that education is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

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