2021年7月11托福写作回忆和解析含范文【独立写作】

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　　环球教育   上海学校

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　　综合点评

　　这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中，综合写作是新的考题，独立写作重复家考题目。

　　其中，综合写作考查生态环境类，整体难度适中，生僻词汇较少。

　　独立写作个人品质类话题，难度适中，三选一类话题，学生在备考过程需要重视这类考题。

　　独立写作

　　话题分类社会生活和个人品质类

　　考题回忆Sometimes people wish to be more confident-for example, they may want to express their opinions more frequently in meetings at work, or they want to contribute more to class discussions at school. which one do you think would best help to increase confidence in these types of work or school situations? why?

　　1. spending more time preparing for class discussions at school or meetings at work

　　2. learning about and practicing techniques to help you become more confident

　　3. finding a more experienced person who can give advice about how to handle these situations.

　　解题思路

　　写作思路：

　　要点：三选一话题，可以用让步转折的写法，先选择一个立场，写出两个原因，再用一个让步段，写另外两个立场也是有优点的，但是还是觉得自己选择的那个立场更好一些。

　　观点：finding a more experienced person who can give advice about how to handle these situations

　　1. more successful experience to share

　　（1）经验多的人可以分享成功的方法给你

　　（2）经验多的人可以告诉你哪些地方需要注意，错误需要避免

　　2. more objective

　　（1）更加客观，更能帮助我们提升信心

　　（2）更多知识和技巧

　　3.让步：

　　Spending more time practicing might provide with more information needed and confidence you want. And practicing techniques will also help you become more confident because you are more skillful and proficient.

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　　Sometimes people wish to be more confident-for example, they may want to express their opinions more frequently in meetings at work, or they want to contribute more to class discussions at school. which one do you think would best help to increase confidence in these types of work or school situations? why?

　　1. spending more time preparing for class discussions at school or meetings at work

　　2. learning about and practicing techniques to help you become more confident

　　3. finding a more experienced person who can give advice about how to handle these situations.

　　Nowadays people want to be more confident while working or studying at school because a more confident person will gain popularity and more chances to get a better grade at school or a promotion in the work. From my perspective, I think finding a more experienced person who can give advice about how to handle these situations will help you better become a more confident student or employee.

　　First of all, a more experienced person has more successful experiences to share which will help you become more confident. Asking a more experienced person will help you obtain some methods to be more confident in school discussion and contribute more knowledge to the class. For example, my cousin is a high school student who loves English very much. However, he did not know how to confidently present a speech in front of the class because his oral English is poorer. Then he asked his English teacher who won the first prize in the national English speech competition. And his teacher shared some successful methods and experiences which helps my cousin become more confident and well-prepared in his presentation. His teacher also told my cousin to avoid some common mistakes efficiently. Therefore, asking a more experienced person to share methods and experience will help you become more confident and efficient.

　　Secondly, a more experienced person is more objective and goal-oriented. They know more skills and techniques which will help us become more confident during work. And we all want to contribute more to our job in order to get a pay rise or a promotion. How to confidently show yourself in the work and impress your leader is an essential question to every employee. According to a research conducted by China Daily, those people who express their opinions more frequently and confidently during work will get a pay rise a little quicker than others who do not. Take my aunt as an example, she always gives crucial suggestions in the company and  contributes a lot to her colleagues, customers and leaders. Then she gets a pay rise which also broadens her career prospect.

　　Admittedly, Spending more time practicing might provide you with more information needed and confidence you want because it takes time and energy to prepare. And practicing techniques will also help you become more confident because you are more skillful and proficient. However, a more experienced person will save you a lot more time and become more efficient.

　　In conclusion, I believe that the best way to increase confidence is to consult a more experienced person for some suggestions and methods because of the reasons above.

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