2021年6月5日托福独立写作回忆和解析，含范文！

　　2021年6月5日托福独立写作回忆和解析，含范文！本文由环球教育上海学校李清泉老师整理点评，供大家参考学习！综合点评：这次托福考试写作部分都是旧题，综合写作是2014年3月22日的旧题，独立写作是2016年的旧题。其中，综合写作考查经济，生僻词汇较少，但理解起来困难。独立写作比较抽象，想例子不容易，学生在备考过程需要重视这类考题，准备相关素材。

　　独立写作

　　话题分类抽象类

　　考题回忆Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.

　　用自己的经验和知识解决问题会比寻求别人的建议更好，你是否同意这种看法？

　　解题思路

　　写作思路：

　　要点：抽象类话题一般较难，不需要上升到哲学高度去讨论，托福写作也不是GRE逻辑写作，为了有效利用30分钟的考试时间，应快速选取一方观点，思考两个理由和两个例子。

　　观点：disagree

　　1.有时候需要在自己不擅长的领域做出决定

　　（1）自己的经验和知识具有一定局限性。

　　（2）寻求专业人士的帮助来解决专业问题。

　　2. 寻求帮助是走捷径的方式

　　（1）自己解决需要花很长时间，浪费时间和精力。

　　参考范文范文：

　　When facing problems, some people insist on addressing problems alone, relying on one’s own experience and knowledge and do not want to trouble others. Although I admire their courage and determination,  personally, I would like to ask other people’s help if necessary. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

　　To begin with, everyone has his or her limitations, you may excel in one area but ignorant in another. When addressing a problem that requires knowledge from a different field, you should rely on professional people. My uncle Tom is a compelling example of this. As an experienced banker, he is familiar with mortgage, hedge funds and other financial transactions but he has no experience in law. One day, he got a problem, he was set up by a gym employee and had to pay two thousand dollars for it. He tried to solve this problem by himself first. He spent a whole night arguing with the staff but received no positive feedback. Feeling exhausted, he called his lawyer friend. The following morning, they showed up together before the front door of the gym. The employee was indifferent at first, but when my uncle introduced his lawyer and present his business card, he turned pale immediately and, well, you get the idea, problems were fixed within half an hour. If my uncle insisted on solving problem by himself and not asking for professional people’s help, he may end up losing money.

　　Secondly, it is a wasting of energy and time to try to solve everything on your own. If you want to show people your ability to fix problems, then go ahead, solve it alone, but if you just want to get things done, asking other people’s advice saves you time and energy. When I was younger, my teacher used to tell me that if you couldn’t solve a math problem within 10 minutes, you should call your friend, all you need probably is a hint, but that hint saves you a lot of time. You know, teenagers’ time is valuable, especially when they are preparing for entrance examination. Now that I am working, I find my teacher’s suggestion still useful. Colleagues are not only your competitors, they can be your teachers as well, whenever I encounter a tough problem, I always humbly ask my colleagues for help and there are two benefits, for one thing, it strengthens your relationship with coworkers, for another thing, which is most importantly, it helps to solve problems efficiently and efficiency is a significant factor to companies.

　　In conclusion, asking other people’s advice is not to show your weakness, especially when other people are more professional than you, and it saves you energy and time as well.