2021年6月5日托福写作回忆和解析，含范文！

　　2021年6月5日托福写作回忆和解析，含范文！  环球教育上海学校李清泉老师整理点评，供大家参考学习！综合点评：这次托福考试写作部分都是旧题，综合写作是2014年3月22日的旧题，独立写作是2016年的旧题。其中，综合写作考查经济，生僻词汇较少，但理解起来困难。独立写作比较抽象，想例子不容易，学生在备考过程需要重视这类考题，准备相关素材。

　　综合写作

　　话题分类农业经济

　　考题回忆总论点讨论美国农业补贴(agriculture subsidies)有没有好处

　　阅读部分好处一：稳定农产品价格，在农产品产量下降的时候，补贴可以弥补农民的收入，以防粮食产品价格飞涨。

　　好处二：农业补贴可以帮助贫困国家度过粮食缺乏的危机，解决贫困饥饿的问题。

　　好处三：农业上的补贴可以增加农业就业率，农业上的补贴可以吸引更多的人从事农业这一行业，弥补欠缺的人才。

　　听力部分反驳一：虽然可以稳定价格，但这种价格减少的原因是政府投入了资金，这些资金来自税收，所以价格减少的这个幅度最终的买单者是人民。

　　反驳二：不能帮助弱国，当贫穷国家出现粮食危机需要进口的时候，他们会发现进口的价格低于本的粮食的价格，因而不能保护当地农民的利益。

　　反驳三：不能增加就业，农业补贴只用于一部分农作物如crop，当农业补贴加大，那么为了提高生产力，crop的生产方式会高度机械化，所以不用人工劳作，而且，种植其他农业品种的企业没有优势会倒闭，加深就业问题。

　　解题思路阅读部分

　　1. 1. 稳定农产品价格;

　　2. 2. 解决贫困饥饿的问题;

　　3. 3. 增加农业就业率.

　　听力部分

　　1. 1. 资金来自税收;

　　2. 2. 不能保护贫困国家农民的利益;

　　3. 3. 农业企业一旦没有优势就会倒闭，加重了就业问题。

　　参考范文范文:

　　The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about pros and cons of American agricultural subsidies. The reading passage asserts that providing subsidies is a great way to give farmers a financial out, while the lecture maintains that the three pros stated in the passage all have weaknesses and are not as useful.

　　To begin with, the lecture admits that agricultural subsidies can stabilize crop prices during poor seasons, otherwise prices would soar without government intervention. However,  the money paid to farmers to supplement their income actually comes from taxpayers. The seemingly cheaper products are an illusion, in reality, you still pay the same price.

　　Secondly, the lecture cast doubts on the passage’s argument that agricultural subsidies can solve poor countries’ food scarcity problem. When cheap foreign agricultural products, whose cheaper price is the result of government subsidies, are imported to poor countries, local farmers will discover that they cannot compete with them because their products are more expensive, so this may bankrupt them.

　　Thirdly, the lecture refutes that agricultural subsidies can attract talents to join this field. For one thing, agricultural subsidies only focus on certain crops. In order to improve productivity farmers will implement more automatic process to grow food, which will results in less labors and more machines. Also, products with no subsidies will lose advantages. As a result, farmers producing these products will lose jobs, which will make unemployment problems in agricultural industry even worse.