2021年4月24日托福独立写作解析及范文|托福机经

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　　独立写作

　　话题分类教育类

　　考题回忆Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your same age.

　　本场考题是老题重现，在2014/11/8的B卷和2016/4/9 都考过

　　解题思路

　　写作思路：

　　要点：属于交友类话题，从年长的朋友的角度展开比较容易，可以思考年长带来的优势，比如经验、心理等

　　观点：agree

　　1.从专业知识的角度

　　（1）年长的朋友经历过课程选择、遭遇困难、攻克挑战的整个过程，从而可以给到具体化的有针对性的建议。

　　（2）年长的朋友更加理解学生的特有困难，也不会评判你的脆弱或无知，找他们要建议，没有后顾之忧

　　2.从人际技巧的角度

　　（1）生活中需要寻找建议的场景不仅仅是学习，还有人际技巧方面年青人需要听取过来人的。年长些的朋友阅历与视野更丰富，更可以给出有效用的方案。

　　（2）年长的朋友更知道大的画面，知道在各种任务中哪一个最重要，这种谋略性思考也是同龄人很难超越的

　　3.让步：诚然有人认为现在世界变化如此之快以致于3-5年就能产生所谓的代沟，但是，信息的激增并不会改变人生的基本需要，也不会降低基本原则或核心价值观的重要性，所以总的说来，年长朋友的忠告会更宝贵。

　　参考范文范文：

　　Friendship has been cherished throughout the history of all cultures, and has become even more indispensable with the growingly fierce competition. After all, only by heeding more valuable advices from our friends, our competitive advantages will be maximized. Some people trust older friends for their wisdom while others prefer listening to the insights of their peers. From my perspective, it is definitely more valuable to consult with older friends.

　　Firstly, older friends are better equipped with expertise and certainly more resourceful in academic performance than those friends of your same age. With a more systematic and comprehensive education, older friends are more intelligent to help you tackle a great variety of obstacles confronted by you. Besides, people become more compassionate and empathetic if they have experienced similar dilemma or difficulties that you are struggling with, so you don’t have to confront the misunderstanding or even judgmental attitude from novice in the field.

　　What’s more, advice from older friends are more constructive when it comes to social and interpersonal skills. Sooner or later, we need to learn how to interact with professors, employers, partners of all kinds, it is hard to imagine that your peer group friends would be as insightful and visionary since they are definitely less experienced and sophisticated compared with older friends. Older friends are also more strategic in their thinking, thanks to prioritizing all kinds of tasks to fulfill objectives, which makes their suggestion unique and efficacious.

　　Admittedly, some people argue that in this era of information explosion, even 3-5 years of age gap would make it harder for people to empathize with each other thoroughly, let along seeking advice from much older friends However, the ubiquity of information does not and will not alter the paramount core values and principles. What defines us and shapes our characters are timeless charisma, ingenuity and wisdom. Consequently we will always be depending on eminent minds of our older friends to be a more inspired, motivated and joyful individual.

　　To conclude, older friends and their advice are big assets. By interacting and mimicking them, we would be able to incorporate more resources, experiences and inspirations and stay away from confusions, blunders and frustrations.