雅思大作文7分范文及解析：国际旅游造成文化冲突

　　雅思大作文7分范文及解析：国际旅游造成文化冲突。这是一道观点类的话题，聊的是国际旅游带来的不同文化的人们之间的理解与冲突问题。要注意的是，Rather than 的意思是国际旅游导致了相互的冲突而没有理解，因而要进行两方面分别论证。

　　观点类大作文，旅游类话题

　　Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　题目来源：2018年6月2日亚太雅思大作文

　　题目大意

　　如今，国际旅游业是世界上最大的产业。但是国际旅游在不同文化的人之间制造了紧张而不是理解。你同意或不同意？

　　思路解析

　　下面带大家来具体看下。

　　我们先来看国际旅游的本质。从根本上来说，国际旅游是使得当事人到达一个具有不同风景和文化的地方，在那边放松身心、或是让当事人亲眼目睹不同的风景、亲身参与并体验不同的文化活动、历史景观或风土人情等。

　　在这过程中，双方的理解和冲突可能都是存在的，不会只存在一面而没有另一面，因此对题目的观点我们持反对态度。旅行者如果在旅游过程中有着不错的体验，自然会对当地有一个更好的印象，并且通过参与互动等方式能够了解当地的文化，并尝试去接受和理解这些文化所带来的种种结果。

　　但如果旅行者体验不佳，或者当地人因为旅行者的涌入占据了当地的公共设施和资源，影响原来的生活后，则有可能双方都对彼此产生不满，进而引发矛盾和冲突。但是这种冲突本质上来说，很难仅仅归结于是由国际旅行引起的。

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　　高分范文示例

　　The bigoted opinion that international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people may be too subjective and without seeing past the truth behind the phenomenon.

　　For those myopically linking the unfavored interconnectedness between people to the international traveling may fail to discover the real fact that is correlated to the emergence of tension. What really causes the tensioned interpersonal relationship between the locals and the foreign comers is the cultural or physical conflicts and the interruption of living, and they certainly do not source from the tourism itself. Indeed, to the local dwellers of the resorts, they feel more or less unhappy when seeing a throng of foreign travelers flocking to the place they are living in and over occupying infrastructures, public facilities and material resources, and they would be with anger when suddenly too much mismatching in terms of customs and concepts emerges between the two; that makes what the tension is, and once the traveling population increases, there are more possibilities to exacerbate the case.   Whereas all those mentioned situations actually happen anytime when there are people immigrating, and however reluctant one is to admit the truth, it is not the tourism that directly makes this happen, even though the industry does have an effect on increasing the number of people flowing into a place; to blame the strained relation on tourism sounds reckless.

　　Understandings, conversely, are practically what the international tourism has largely brought about to both residents and voyagers. The essence of tourism and what people always do in tourist destinations contribute to this type of appreciation. For any appraisal of the outcome to happen, one must first verify whether the result is the terminal of the entire process and whether the process actually works. The basic goal of tourism to some extent is to make travelers deeply understand and experience the culture of their tourist resorts through visually and physically sensing the every subtle difference and shared details with their own living places; sets of related facts and data points together prove that consumers in this industry certainly have had a “bon voyage” and satisfied themselves with what they have experienced and achieved alongside their unusual routes. Then it is not surprising that hundreds of tourism-related movies narrate that the protagonists are less biased to some remote, desolated cultures once they have been put into those places, sometimes unintentionally, and may finally find the latter interesting and beloved.

　　In conclusion, before scrutinizing whether some consequences are caused by a certain process, we must first look at what the realistic situation is and whether the possible outcomes are truly produced by it.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　相关词汇：

　　Bigoted 偏执的

　　Myopically 天真地

　　Interconnectedness 联系

　　Dweller 居民