7月24日大陆雅思大作文高分范文分享：人们更加独立or依赖别人

　　7.24大陆雅思大作文高分范文分享：人们更加独立or依赖别人，题目大意：有人认为现代人彼此间更加依赖，而有人认为现代人更加独立。讨论双方观点。下面就和上名校小编一起来看看高分范文吧，希望能够给各位同学提供一些雅思写作的思路！

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　　The belief that modernity has fostered interdependence over dependence can only be viewed from a personal perspective. Human relationships, whether more intimate or isolated impact the general public in different ways. I would say that individuals in modern society can be deemed both ‘more dependent’ and ‘more independent’, depending on the aspects of life from which they view society today.

　　From the perspective of material life, the younger generation does appear to be more reliant upon others to assist them in coping with the very real problems that life today presents. The youngsters today, particularly those reciding in metropolitan cities, are frustrated by prohibitively high living costs like rental rates and various bills, which forces them to share flats with peers or remain living under the same roof with parents even after finding gainful employment. Worse still, even those with higher incomes may not survive without others’ help. The increasingly fast-paced workplace has locked many commuters into a lifestyle of office overtime, which leads to dependence on baby sitters or family members to support their personal household – whether these be childcare, cleaning and household maintenance. So, even though independently wealthy, they must also rely on community to support their lifestyle.

　　However, that is not the whole story – from another spectrum, modern society has also promoted self-reliance in individuals. The life pressures mentioned above may also engender the solitary lifestyle; there are those who prefer to live alone. This priority would lead them to rent a low-cost apartment and forego a family. Away from the economic concern, intellectual independence is another issue: Accessibility to information and protocols in the digital environment allows modern individuals to scrutinize divergent views and therefore develop their own opinions, rather than merely being a passive follower of others’ voices.

　　It is my opinion, then, it is the personal life choices and values that motivate people to be more or less independent in today’s world; these life style choices will govern their proclivity toward dependence or independence.

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　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Modernity  现代化

　　Recide 定居

　　Metropolitan city 大都市

　　Prohibitively  过度地

　　Rental rates  房租

　　Gainful employment  高薪工作

　　Commuters  上班族

　　Baby sitter  保姆

　　Proclivity  偏好