6月5日雅思大作文外教范文：家庭和外部哪个对孩子影响更大

　　6月5日大陆雅思大作文外教范文：家庭和外部哪个对孩子影响更大，这个题目一道观点类大作文，难度不是很大。主要讨论的是外界和家庭哪个对于孩子影响更大。下面就跟随上名校小编一起来看看外教老师分享的示例范文吧，希望对大家的备考能够有参考价值！

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　　作文题目

　　A family has a great influence on children's development, but the influence from outside of home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?

　　题型类别：单边类

　　题材类别：社会类

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　　A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outside of home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?（2019.11.16）

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　　Children are influenced by a variety of individuals in this day and age ranging from family members to friends and even teachers and strangers. Whether or not the impact from family or outside the home plays a larger role in children’s lives will be debated.

　　The majority of youngsters spend a large chunk of their time at home, particularly younger kids, meaning they are more exposed to the behaviour and customs of their relatives, including their parents, grandparents and other extended family members. When children are young, especially under the age of five, they are capable of learning at a quicker rate than when they get older, not In our own time, the opposition between 'descriptivists’ and 'prescriptivists’ has often become extreme, with both sides painting unreal pictures of the other. Descriptive grammarians have been presented as people who do not care about standards, because of the way they see all forms of usage as equally valid. Prescriptive grammarians have been presented as blind adherents to a historical tradition. The opposition has even been presented in quasi-political terms - of radical liberalism vs elitist conservatism.to mention their minds are developing rapidly at this stage. Moreover, it has been said that parents are the first teachers of children, which is a fairly accurate statement signifying that this period has a strong long-term impact on their brains and personality development.

　　Nevertheless, once children reach school age, most of their waking hours are spent in the lassroom with their classmates, friends and teachers. As a result, parents might take a backseat to educational instructors and peers with regards to influence on their kids. At school, teachers and instructors not only shape children’s academic achievements but also their social skills and build their character. Schools enable children to widen their perspectives and learn new concepts their parents may not be aware of or are unable to teach, including how to get along well with peers and how to follow school rules and societal regulations.

　　All in all, family generally has a huge impact on early development of children as toddlers and infants spend most of their time at home. However, older children may spend the bulk of their time at school where they tend to imitate their teachers and friends.

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　　范文由环球教育加拿大国籍外教 Khalid Hasmath 老师本人执笔创作，仅供学术交流。