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　　5月29日雅思A类小作文外教范文来啦！范文由环球教育谢鹏老师和环球教育加拿大国籍外教 Khalid Hasmath 老师共同创作完成仅供学术交流。下面就跟随上名校小编一起来详细的看一看吧，如果你需要专业的指导，戳客服即可在线咨询！

　　图表类型：柱状图：静态对比

　　作文题目：

　　The graph shows the online activities people chose to do in a UK city in two particular years: 2007 and 2009. （2016.6.4 机经原图）

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　　The bar chart compares the online activities people chose to participate in a British city during the two years of 2007 and 2009. Overall, online shopping maintained the highest position as the most popular online activity in both years, whereas there emerged a greater portion of users who focused on entertainment including video games, chatting and television.

　　In 2007, a comparatively large percentage of people used the Internet for some practical purposes: with the largest proportion of netizens enjoying online shopping, approximately 43%；the second place was occupied by reading books online at 35%, followed by banking and learning at 34% and 30%, respectively. The remaining 25% of individuals using the Internet was distributed among video games and TV, representing 15% and 10%, respectively.

　　In stark contrast, most online activities had attracted a larger proportion of users by 2009, whilst reading books and learning online experienced a marginal decrease by around 5%, each accounting for 30% and 25%. Nevertheless, significant growth was seen in the categories of online shopping, banking and watching television, each rising by around 10%, give or take, in 2009.

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　　范文由环球教育谢鹏老师和环球教育加拿大国籍外教 Khalid Hasmath 老师共同创作完成仅供学术交流。