4月24日雅思小作文解析及范文：游戏销量对比

下面的图表显示了2003年韩国的游戏销量在不同性别和年龄的对比，以及不同游戏的销量。

开始段 - 改写题目：

The three pie chars illustrate the information about electronic gamers and best-selling games in South Korea in 2003.

概述段：最受欢迎的年龄段、男性玩家多于女性、最受欢迎的游戏类型

Overall, electronic games were most popular with 18-to-35-year-old young people and the number of male game players was much larger than that of their female counterparts. Moreover, action games were the top-selling games of the year .

细节段-1：年龄和性别分别的人数占比

It is clear from the first diagram that people aged between 18 and 35 years old accounted for the largest proportion of total game players at 42%, followed by under-18s ( 35%) and over-35s (23%). The  graph shows that gender-wise, males far outnumbered females, constituting the large majority (72%) of the total electronic game consumers.​

细节段-2：不同类型的游戏销量占比描述

The third pie chart gives information about the best-selling electronic game types and their sales proportion. Out of the top 5 games, action was the most preferred game genre, whose sales were just under half (42%) of total sales, twice as much as the next most popular game type — sports (21%). Meanwhile, the figure for racing games was slightly lower at 17% and the sales percentages for education and role play games were exactly the same at 7%. Compared with the top 5 best-selling games, the rest combined only contributed 6% to the total sales.