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　　Many children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies at school. What are the causes? What are the possible solutions to this problem?

　　题目来源：2021年4月10日亚太雅思大作文（重复14年1月18日大陆考题）

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　　It is true that school pupils nowadays are faced with the difficulty of paying attention to their study. This essay will outline why this has happened and put forward appropriate solutions to address this severe problem.

　　In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for the problem of concentration in classroom to students. Firstly, the development of modern technology is responsible for children not paying attention to study. For example, children are easily tempted by modern video games, and addicted to virtual reality. Secondly, school curriculum design does not always lay emphasis on students’ learning effectiveness, especially in some oriental countries. Children in these countries tend to have many classes in a day with only limited breaks between each class. Finally, students are expected to finish homework, as a way of reflection for their study, after school. They often spend hours on completing the after-school tasks for each subject, and this may lead to the situation where student losing focus persists when coming to school the next day.

　　The problem for students’ difficulty in concentration can certainly be mitigated. I believe the change must start with parents, who need to be persuaded that it is important to supervise their children. Controlling children’s screen time strictly, for example, can help to prevent them from being distracted by video games. Next, school is responsible to employ scientific and effective schedule setting, which contributes to improving students’ learning effectiveness. At the same time, school should play an important role in improving the communication between two groups, teachers and parents, to meet the need of balancing students’ study and their leisure time.

　　In conclusion, we may continue to face the classroom concentration problem unless parents, teachers, and schools work together to manage children more effectively.

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　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　On-going  一直以来的

　　Bountiful  许多的

　　Whisper  小声说话

　　Divert  分心

　　Contributory  主导的

　　Memorization  记忆

　　Insufficiency  不足

　　Animation  动画