雅思大作文7分范文：什么样的人算是成功？​

　　3.27亚太雅思大作文7分范文：什么样的人算是成功？​这道双边类的题目其实是在要求同学论证：成功是否与钱有关。但是，每个人对于成功的定义都不一样，所以成功很难定义。而且题意的两个观点并不冲突，因此同学可以论证各自的合理性，并提出自己的立场：无法用理性方式论证得出“谁才是更加成功的人”。

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　　Some people reckon that people who have tons of money are more successful while others argue that greater success depends on individuals’ contributions to the society. It looks to me that both views have their justifications but neither of them can illustrate the whole picture since there is no objective criterion to determine which group of people are more successful.

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　　On the one hand, it can be justified that money is one of the major indicators of a person’s success. This is because if a person earns plenty of money, he or she must be an expert in their chosen professions, with extraordinary skills or abundant experience. Moreover, their capabilities to seize the hard-won opportunity to make enormous fortunes denote their vision, boldness and decision-making power. Warren Buffet, for instance, whose great foresight to invest in stock market initially stemmed from his thorough practice of Graham’s philosophy of value investing. Therefore, such industry leaders with these valuable qualities can certainly be considered successful.

　　On the other hand, opponents claim that greater success does not reside in money but in a person’s contributions to the whole community. It is definitely true that people who commit themselves to different facets of society are more likely to earn deep respect from others since they would positively influence other community members with their personal power. To be specific, teachers impart knowledge to the younger generations in class and nurture them to be reliable successors of a country. While scientists devote themselves to the fields such as medicine, biology and astronomy, which are of critical significance to the evolution of a nation and even the whole of mankind. Such people are not necessarily wealthy, but they can be crowned as successful individuals beyond doubt.

　　In conclusion, I hold that both arguments can be justified with reasonable grounds. However, it would be simple-minded to attempt to define which group of people are more successful since it is impossible to give a precise and standard definition of success.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Extraordinary 非凡的；特别的

　　Denote 表示；象征

　　Boldness 胆识

　　Foresight 远见

　　Stem from 源于

　　Reside in 在于

　　Facet 方面

　　Successor 继承人

　　Ground 理由