雅思大作文7分范文：电脑游戏对孩子的利弊

　　雅思大作文7分范文：电脑游戏对孩子的利弊，题目大意：一些人认为玩电脑游戏对孩子各方面都不好。而另外一些人认为它对电脑的儿童成长有一定的好处。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。

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　　With the rapid development of society, computer games have become an integral part of people's life, but people hold opposite views on it. Some people argue that computer games have unfavorable influences on all aspects of children, but others believe that playing computer games actually brings benefits to children.

　　Although the word "everything" is quite extreme, it is hardly far-fetched to imagine just how deeply the situation would negatively impact our next generation, not only in terms of their physical conditions, but of the mentality and personality formation. Healthy problems may be initially be witnessed as in the process of playing children would need to be sedentary, which leads to the lack of outdoor exercises, which is extremely unfavorable to the physical conditions of children. The reality seems even harsher if we consider the following-up consequences brought to these youngsters’ personalities. A reckless indulgence in electronic games may easily distort their attitude of facing problems or persons in the real life, by which I mean as it is relatively easy to achieve success in the virtual world, children who are addicted to the game world will gradually refuse to have face-to-face communication with their relatives and friends in the real world. As time goes by, they will be completely isolated.

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　　Nevertheless，with the advances of science and technology industry, the positive impacts of computer games should not be underestimated. On the one hand, virtual world can provide children with multiple and wonderful learning or training modes, where many scenes can never be realized in real life. For example, after a failure or even "death" in the game world, players can read the progress and try repetitively, which can encourage children, who have relatively weaker tolerance to adversity, to have the courage to enjoy the fun of continuous exploration. On the other hand, according to the characteristics of primary students, many teaching softwares or apps for younger people adopt game mode to attract children's attention, designing interesting and diversified process to maintain children's learning enthusiasm and progress, so that learning is no longer monotonous and boring.

　　In conclusion，it seems to me that computer games should be treated rationally. For children who lack self-control, we really need parents and teachers to strictly control the content and duration of the game, so as to reduce the negative impacts of computer games and maximize their positive influences.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　integral 必须的

　　Sedentary 久坐

　　following-up consequences 后续影响

　　Isolate 隔离

　　reckless 鲁莽

　　Indulgence 沉迷

　　Exploration 探索

　　Enthusiasm 热情

　　Rationally 理性

　　Self-control 自控能力

　　Duration 时长

　　Maximize 最大化