2月20日雅思大作文7分范文：减少学习时间去运动

　　2.20大陆雅思大作文7分范文：减少学习时间去运动，父母应该鼓励孩子在学习上少花时间，而多用点时间在体育锻炼上。同意反对？下面为大家分享一篇高分范例，供各位学生参考！更多雅思备考资料，请持续关注环球教育！

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　　It is assumed that parents should encourage their children to place more emphasis on fitness exercise as opposed to immersing in study; however, I will disagree with this claim due to its lack of logical premises.

　　There seems to be reasons why this opinion has been applauded by some people. For those who think in this way, the overriding conundrum that afflicts younger generations today appears to be the pressure from school work – it deprives students of their leisure life and exacerbate a sedentary lifestyle, which is recognized as a key culprit of many physical and mental afflictions of adolescents. In this respect, many people jump to the conclusion that, while focusing exclusively on the learning, it is parents’ responsibility to encourage children to share more time on fitness activities.

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　　While it seems plausible for parents to encourage kids to keep balance between study and physical exercise, it is difficult for me to see the statement as anything other than a stereotype. Those advocates of the claim in the topic are oblivious to the fact that parents may not fully understand the interests or stress of their children, and therefore they are not the right persons to say which activity deserve more time. Another problem we should not ignore is that there is no generally accepted standard on which aspect has more relevance to students’ development. While physical exercise does serve as an antidote to tiredness and stress for students immersing excessively in study, the case is not the same for those who have spent much of their spare time on the playground – it is study that deserves more attention from them.

　　From what has been discussed above, I don’t believe it is reasonable for parents to encourage children how to spend their time on study and athletics.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Immerse  埋头做

　　Deprive  剥夺

　　Sedentary  坐着的

　　Affliction  问题

　　Antidote  解药