雅思G类小作文的常考话题文章评析：短期课程学习

　　“短期课程学习”是雅思G类小作文的常考话题，通常题目会要求写信反馈一下学习感受，可以说说课程内容、教学方式、学习心得等。本文为大家分享一篇，并且保留所有错误，在后面进行点评，我们一起看看，是不是你常犯的。

　　You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.

　　Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In you letter,

　　-describe what you enjoyed about the course

　　-say how much cooking you’ve done since the course

　　-suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

　　题目解析：很多考生喜欢按“建议信” 、“投诉信”、“感谢信”等分类检索素材，实际上，G类小作文的3个写作任务很可能覆盖2个及以上这种分类，如本题就涉及感谢和建议。大家需要学习建议、感谢、投诉、咨询的短语和句子表达， 但也要注意积累各种话题的相关词汇。

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　　以下范文为原文搬运，保留了所有错误。

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am writing to you to provide a feedback on the ‘Kitchen Wonders’ cookery course I have taken recently. As my cooking had become more and more complimented since,I would like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for the evolution I have attained from the course.

　　Albeit a short and basic course , it contained useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which were entirely new to me. Having cooked by instinct these tips（enabled） brought to light simple mistakes I had been making, which now I avoid. Moreover, I particularly enjoyed the 'Kitchen Hacks' module, and its techniques have brought my cooking skills to a new level.

　　I have been using these courses on weekends, when I normally cook for my family, and the difference is clear. The effect of the course had on my dishes has been remarked on some occasions, and this new found ability has been raising expectations as the word spreads throughout my relatives. Still, I am confident they shall not be disappointed.

　　I intend on  honing this skill further, especially since the course did not address dessert-making. Should such a course be offered, I would be delighted l to enrolland keep collecting awestruck expressions from my relatives. I really appreciate the results your course has provided me, and I look forward to even more.

　　Sincerely,

　　Paulo

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　　考官评语：回应了所有要点并进行了一定拓展。写信目的清晰，唯一的不恰当在于结尾的sincerely。有逻辑地组织了信息和观点，行文流畅。恰当使用了各种连接词，如albeit，it, which, these tips, moreover。词汇丰富，展示了非常用词和搭配的使用能力，如cooked by instinct, brought to light, Kitchen Hacks, new foundability, honing my skills, awestruck，错误很少，如the effect the course had on my dishes has been remarked(upon) on some occasions, enroll应是enrol。使用了各种复杂语法结构，句子通常无误，标点使用正确，错误很少。