雅思G类小作文范文分析-对课程不满

　　雅思G类小作文范文分析-对课程不满！“课程”是雅思G类小作文常考话题，以下题目近年来曾多次出现。范文修改自网络。后附近似话题审题分析。

　　You are attending a course at an evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about the course. In your letter, you should:

　　– Describe the course you are taking.

　　– Explain what you don’t like about the course.

　　– Give your opinion about what should be done about it.

　　范文：160 words

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　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am writing to draw your attention to some issues of the night course that I am currently enrolled in at your school. It is a three-month French pastry cooking class which has started for one month.

　　The first problem is the teaching arrangement. We have not given any practicallessons as promised and your staff told us these classes were cancelled due to funding issues, which is unacceptable. Besides, the teacher has been late for classes several times and this has slowed our progress.

　　I would be grateful if you could look into these matters immediately. Please reschedule two missed practical classes as soon as possible as we have already spent hefty time and money on the course. Also, it would be really beneficial for us if you could rearrange a new tutor for the remaining time.

　　I look forward to hearing from you and your active involvement in these issues.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Jessica Brown

　　类似考题：

　　You are attending a night course in the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell:

　　-what course you are studying

　　-what things you are not happy about

　　-what you expect from the school director.

　　审题分析：这道题与上一道几乎相同，但也有差异，想要TR高分，应注意回应题目背景里的第二句“You are not happy with some parts of the course”，“对课程的一些部分不满意”。要做到充分回应题目，可以在开头或第一段的结尾，适当提及对当前课程的总体感受/满意的部分，然后在第二段用转折的方式提出不满，这样既充分回应了题目，又提升了CC表现。

　　考场上一定要认真读题，确认都需要回应/写什么，再动笔。