1.16大陆雅思大作文7分范文：学生缺乏理财知识

　　1.16大陆雅思大作文7分范文：学生缺乏理财知识，这道题其实没有那么难，下面分享一篇高分范文，学生们可以参考一下，看看高分作文是从哪些地方入手的！更多雅思备考请持续关注环球教育！

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　　A lack of money managerial ability among high school graduates has become a commonplace conundrum that obsesses many countries recently. While many factors may contribute to this trend, I will attribute this problem to the imbalanced school education and media impacts, and then provide some practical suggestions accordingly.

　　To identify the root reasons behind inadequate financial awareness among youngsters, we need to first understand the status que of high school education. Given the fierce competition to enter universities, high schools opt to prioritize students’ academic performance over other practical skills; on the list is the financial managerial competency. Another culprit we cannot afford to ignore is the advertising aimed at teenagers, which induces susceptible young minds to lead an extravagant lifestyle; those exposed to the ubiquitous advertisements are less likely to spend their money in a rational way.

　　While the inadequacy of financial planning among high school graduates has been frowned upon in many countries, I will say there still something we can to do to curb this trend. One suggestion is to list financial management as a compulsory course in high school curriculum. When initiated into the area of knowledge during pre-university years, youngsters can be cultivated with basic consciousness how to manage their money. Another measure can be more stringent censorship of marketing on teenagers, which will mitigate the inducement of youngsters’ spending binge.

　　From what has been discussed above, it is my conclusion therefore, the lack of financial managerial competency among younger generation is the result of inadequate high school education and misleading media. In response to this, an adjustment of high school curriculum and strengthened media censorship are needed to tackle the affliction.

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　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Obsess  困扰

　　Prioritize  优先考虑

　　Competency  技能

　　Culprit  罪魁祸首

　　Susceptible   易受影响的

　　Ubiquitous  无所不在的

　　Initiate  传授知识

　　Censorship   媒体监管