12.4大陆雅思大作文7分范文：遵循传统vs个性自由

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　　双边类大作文，社会类话题

　　Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of society. Others think young people are free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　题目来源：2020年12月24日大陆雅思大作文（重复2012年2月4日大陆题目）

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　　Some people claim that youngsters should learn to be a social member restricted by traditional etiquette, while others consider it better for them to be independent individual as they wish. Personally speaking, neither of the two opinions is to justified enough to represent the entire picture.

　　On the one hand, it doesn’t make sense to oblige young minds to stick to traditions without substantiating what specific principles to follow. Indeed, some traditional virtues do contribute to the cultivation of moral convictions among younger generations, whether these be the respect for others, hardworking spirit, or frugality. Nevertheless, the problem with the statement is the ambiguous descriptor ‘the traditions of the society’, which is an overarching concept that incorporates all rules embraced by older generations – while some still deserve a place today, others may be incompatible with the whitewater world of constant change. One concept that fails to meet the modern trend of thought is the entrenched stereotype of women, whose role has transformed from housewives locked to kitchens to business elites in offices as their male counterparts.

　　By the same token, it is also generalized to venerate the individualism without taking into account contexts. The devotees of personal freedom may point to its value in the establishment of qualities such as self-reliance or critical thinking ability; both are imperative in cultivating independent young minds. However, those thinking in this way are oblivious to the underlying interplay between individual liberty and social order – the appropriateness of encouraging individualism should be subject to the social impacts desired in the local context and what is valued by local stakeholders. Let’s not forget that many social conundrums are attributed to the unrestricted behaviors of youngsters, such as drug abuse, juvenile delinquency, etc.

　　From what has been discussed, it is my conclusion therefore, neither social traditions nor individualism should be venerated as the only model of society; which view deserves more attention should be contextualized.

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　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Etiquette  规范

　　Moral conviction 道德规范

　　Frugality  勤俭

　　Overarching  包罗万象的

　　Entrenched  固有的

　　Stereotype  偏见

　　Individualism   个人主义

　　Individual liberty  个人自由

　　Juvenile delinquency  少年犯罪