雅思大作文真题9分范文分析-学生产生问题行为的原因及解决办法

　　雅思大作文真题9分范文分析-学生产生问题行为的原因及解决办法！以下大作文真题及官方9分范文来自剑4（A类）Test4. 虽然是A类题目，但“教育”、“学生”、“学校”也是G类的常见话题，建议大家结合范文和组长解析，体会如何组织段落并积累观点和话题词汇。

　　In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.

　　What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

　　Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

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　　学习点解析：话题词汇：poor student behavior. 开头段常用句式：...seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that ...are probabaly responsible for this.常用论点：modern lifestyles是很多问题的可能原因. 变换因果关系常用表达：用sth is responsible for替代because.

　　In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.

　　学习点解析：话题词汇: be spoilt, love, attention, working parents, behave as they please, grow up, consideration for others, understandingof sth. 结构方面：第一句延伸开头段提出的modern lifestyles，第二句和第三句展开解释中心句提到的情况如何导致孩子行为不良，第四句拓展不良行为的表现。常用短语：生活标准standard of living，以更物质的方式in material ways.

　　When they get to school age they have not learnt any self-control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.

　　学习点解析：这一段继续解释被惯坏的孩子会出现哪些不良行为。话题词汇: get to school age, self-control, self-discipline, have respect for, obey school rules.

　　Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation. But I think the solution to the problems lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.

　　学习点解析：第一句承上启下开始回应第二个写作任务，第二句给出个人观点并拓展，第三句解释这种方法的效果。常用表达：measures should be taken to combat the situation, the solution to the problems lies with, be more aware of, future consequences. 话题词汇：teachers, raise, be considerate of others, social, responsible.

　　Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.

　　学习点解析：这一段给出第二种解决办法，说清楚了谁应该做什么、怎么做。话题词汇：parenting classes, nursery schools, the next generation, parental support.