雅思小作文高分范文——柱状图

　　雅思小作文高分范文——柱状图。本题中的柱状图涉及的国家居然达到了10个，太夸张了。如果在写作过程中不努力压缩数据，那么写出来的文章就会出现篇幅过长的问题或者将文章写成无聊的流水账。

　　因此，先观察数据特点，再把相似的数据放在一起来描述会使文章更加简洁高效。首先，选择将前五名的国家放在一个段落中，之所以这样做主要是考虑到如果只描述前两名的国家，则字数会比较少，那么下面一段描述八个国家会有压力。

　　其次，除前两名国家以外，其他国家都通过一个数据区间来进行概括，从而避免太过啰唆。最后，抓住图表中最特殊的内容进行描述，也就是德国是唯一的一个电力使用量高于发电量的国家。

　　题目

　　The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (C13T3)

　　范文

　　The bar chart shows the top ten producers and consumers of electricity, and how much electricity they produced and consumed in 2014 (measured in billion kilowatts an hour).

　　Approximately 5, 400 and 4, 100 bilion kWh of electricity was produced by China and the US respectively, and their consumption levels were just sightly less than their production levels. Russia，Japan and India ranked third, fourth, and fifth. producing between 1060 to 870 billion kWh, and consuming approximately 1040 to 700 bilion kWh electricity.

　　The other five countries, Canada, France, Brazil，Germany and the Republic of Korea, had produced and used significantly less electricity, ranging from approximately 620 to around 450 billion kWh. It is interesting to note that Germany was the only country to consume more electricity than it produced using about 60 billion kwh electricity more than it generated.

　　To summarise, it is clear that China and the US were the largest producers and consumers of electricity in 2014. In addition, while other nations could meet their electricity demands, with a small surplus, Germany however had not produced sufficient electricity to meet its demands.

　　这个柱状图显示了电力生产和电力消耗前10位的国家，以及2014年它们所生产和消耗的电力情況(以10亿干瓦时计)。

　　中国和美国分别生产了约5.4万亿和4.1万亿干瓦时的电量，其耗电量略低于产电量。俄罗斯、日本和印度分别排名第三、第四和第五位，生产电量约1.06万亿至0.87万亿瓦时，消耗约1.04万亿至0.7万亿干瓦时的电量。

　　其他五个国家加拿大、法国、巴西、德国和韩国的产电量和耗电量大大减少，范国大致为0.62万亿到0.45万亿干瓦时。值得注意的是，德国是唯一一个电力消耗量超过生产量的国家，使用了比发电量高出0.06万亿干瓦时的电量。

　　综上所述，很显然，2014年中国和美国是最大的电力生产国和消耗国。此外，其他国家可以满足自己的电力需求，但盈余很小，而德国没有生产足够的电力来满足其需求。