雅思小作文高分范文——流程图

　　雅思小作文高分范文——流程图，本题中的图属于非常典型的生命周期图。整体而言，这类流程图和其他类别的流程图，如工业生产流程图等，在写法上没有什么本质的不同。写作时，首先需将文章的段落结构确定好，然后按照顺序逐步描述每一个流程。这篇文章开头段仍然是题目的改写，而结尾段也同样是全文的总结。由此说来，相较于那些数据型表格，其实流程图的写作难度较低。

　　题目

　　The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (C10T4)

　　范文

　　The life cycle of a kind of large fish, salmon, Is illustrated by this flow chart.

　　An appropriate place for adult salmons to lay eggs is upper river with water moving slowly, and eggs are often produced under small stones at the root of reeds. After five or six months' growth, eggs become fries with a ength of 3-8cm.

　　Then, fries will leave for lower rivers where the water flow is relatively fast. They will spend approximately four years living there, and subsequently their length will each 12-15cm. called smolts.

　　Smolts will move to the open sea where they will live for about five years. After five years living there, they become 70-76cm, called adults salmon. Having swam back to where they were bom, they will produce their own eggs there. That is how their life cycles.

　　In summary, salmon spend their whole life in three places and their life cycles usually last for almost 10 years.

　　该流程图展示了一种名为鲑鱼的大型鱼类的生命周期。

　　一个适合成年鲑鱼产卵的地点是水流速较慢的上游水域。鱼卵通常被产在小石头的下面，水草的根部。经过五六个月的成长，这些鱼卵变成了长度为3-8厘米的鱼苗。

　　然后，这些鱼苗将去往下游水域，那里水的流速相对较快。它们在那里生活四年左右的时间，接下来它们的长度将达到12-15厘米，被称作幼鲑。

　　幼鲑将游去外海，在那里大约生活五年。之后，它们会长到70-76厘米，被称作成年的鲑鱼。在游回出生地之后，它们将在那里产下鱼卵。这就是它们的生命周期

　　总之，鲑鱼一生会生活在三个地方，整个生命周期会持续大概10年。

　　名师点评

　　考生之所以不太喜欢这类图，其原因大概如下:首先，平时针对流程图的练习较少，所以考生对这类题信心不足。

　　很多考生盲目地认为这类题在雅思写作考试中出现的频率较低，实则不然，近些年的流程图考题数量不少希望考生能够给予足够的重视。

　　其次，这类题中常有生词出现，影响了考生对于题目的理解。但是，也只是影响理解而已，对于全文的写作影响并不大，这些生词几乎不需要考生改写，只需判断一下词性就可以直接将其用到自己的文章里。除此之外，此类题再无难度可言。