雅思小作文高分范文——线状图

　　线状图的本质大同小异，其差别在于线段数量的多少，而线段数量的多少決定了文章分段方法的不同。本题是一道非常典型的线状图小作文题。下面也为大家分享一篇高分范文，文章分成五段，首段改写题目，随后的主一、主二和主三段分别描述每条线的变化趋势，结尾段再进行整体对比。

　　文章的结构和逻辑清晰，一目了然。

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　　题目

　　The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

　　Summarise the information  by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (C5T1）

　　范文

　　It is illustrated by this line chart how the percentage of the population that are seniors(65 and above) in three countries has changed since 1940, and will likely change to 2040.

　　In spite of the low value of Japan before 1988, it has increased since then. Also, this increasing trend is projected to be kept until 2040 when its figure will peak at 27%. The period between 2030 and 2034 will witness the most drastic growth of Japan.

　　Starting from 7% in 1940 and ending up at 25% in 2040, the value of Sweden increases constantly through the whole period, despite two declines, one of which happened from 1980 to 1995 and the other is expected to emerge from 2018 to 2028.

　　The percentage of the USA goes up moderately dunng the whole period. It only experienced a short-time declining trend from 1980 to 2000, followed by a plateau at around 14% between 2000 and 2020.

　　All in all, in 1940 the hgure of the USA ranked the first place, followed by that of Sweden and Japan. Howeve in 2040 the figure of Japan will play the most dominant role, and meanwhile that of USA is expected to amount to the smallest number.

　　这个线状图说明了65岁及以上的人口比例在三个国家从1940年至今是如何变化的，及此后直至2040年将如何发展。

　　尽管在1988年之前日本的该项数据很低，但此后数据一直上升。并且，此上升趋势预计会一直持续到2040年，同年其数据将会达到最大值27％。2030-2034年将见证日本该项数据的最猛烈上升。

　　从1940年的7％开始到2040年的25％结束，瑞典的该项数据在整个时段内持续不断地上升。其间也出现了两次下降，一次发生在1980-1995年，而另一次预计在2018-2028年出现。

　　美国的此项数据在整个时间段内稳定上升。其在1980～2000年仅经历了一个短时间的下降趋势，随后在2000-2020年持平于14％。

　　总之，在1940年美国的数据居于首位，瑞典和日本次之。但是在2040年，日本的数据将会扮演最主要的角色，同时美国的数据预计达到最小。