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　　题目

　　The government should control the amount of violence in films and on elevision in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree. (20170520)

　　范文

　　Over the past few years, people have questioned whether there is too much violence on TV. Some people believe that the govemment should restrict how much violence is shown on television and in movies, to reduce the cnme rate. However, in my opinion reducing the amount of violence shown on the screen will have a negative effect on society

　　Firstly, if the government restricts the amount of violent scenes shown in a film, sales will decline because the whole viewing experience will not be the same. For example, the biggest selling point in an action movie is its intense fighting scenes. If such scenes have been cut, then the viewers may find the film quite boring. In fact, the whole movie industry will be affected if such restrictions are enforced in the action movie, as this genre is essential to the film Culture. Also, the effect of the violent scenes nave on adults is rather minimal. Most adults like to watch moves that contain violence for entertainment, and adults can distinguish between real life and fiction who will not be easily affected by such images. There is no evidence proving that watching violent movies leads to committing crime.

　　On the other hand, although I think that violent scenes should not be cut out of a movie, it IS necessary to use a film classification system when the movie Is eleased. Obviously, teenagers often lack the ability to make rational judgement. There is a possibility that they may imitate behaviour shown in films they watch. Therefore, the harm this kind of movie can have on society can be effectively controlled when a film classification system IS put in place.

　　In conclusion, violence in movies should not simply be restricted, but a more scientific grading system should be adopted. So, I disagree with the views stated above that some violent scenes should be cut out of films

　　几年，人们一直在讨论电视中的力情节是否过多。有些人认为改府应制电视，电影中力情节的数量来率。而我却觉得这么做可能会社会产生不的影响。

　　首先，如果改有限制了电影中暴力场的数量，则上率会下降，因为这会致整体现影体验的不同。季例来说，动作电影最大的卖点就是的打斗场面。如果这类场景被剪掉了，影片就会素然无味。实际上，动作电影对电影文化至关重要，如果动作电影受到限制，那么整个产业都会受影响。并且，力情节对成年人的影响是相当有限的。大多数成年人都是出于娱乐的目的才欢观看包含暴力场景的电影的，而目成年人能够分清现实生活和虚构的电影，不会轻易被这些场景所影响。没有证据证明成年人观看暴力电影和实施犯罪之间存在必然的因果关系。

　　从另一方面讲，虽然我认为电影中的暴力场景不该被剪掉，但是在电影上映的时候，有必要使用电影分级制度(对其进行界定)。显然，青少年往往缺乏理性判所能力，他们观石电影之后可能会模仿其中的行为。所以，严格实施电影分级制度后，这类电影对于社会的危害就可以得到有效的控制。

　　总而言之，不应该简单地对电影中的暴力情节进行限制，但应该对电影实施更科学的评级制度。因此，我不同意上面所提到的观点，即删除电影中的一些暴力场景。

　　名师点评

　　这个题目的动机是好的，即为了降低社会中的暴力犯罪，但是方法过于简单粗暴，有点欠妥。在文章中，我先说明如果政府限制电影中的暴力场景，则上座率会下降，观影体验会变差，并以动作电影为例证明我的论点;而后说明成年人能够分清现实生活和虚构的电影，电影中的暴力场景与实施犯罪之间没有因果关系。实际上，政府应该实施电影分级制度，这样才能有效控制这类电影对于社会的危害。

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