雅思大作文7分范文及解析：政府是否应该优先关注医疗

　　雅思大作文7分范文及解析：政府是否应该优先关注医疗　双边类大作文，政府类话题

　　Some people say governments should give priority to health care, while others believe that taxpayers’ money should be spent on other important priorities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　题目来源：2015年7月25日大陆雅思大作文

　　题目大意

　　一些人或政府应该优先关注医疗，而其他人相信纳税人的钱应该优先花在更加重要的事情上。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。

　　思路解析

　　1. 题干两句话，分别为对立的两个观点，比较对象为政府把纳税人的钱优先花在医疗vs其他更重要的事情上。出题方式为Discuss both views and give your own opinion.讨论类，需要对双方观点进行充分的讨论，最终给出自己的观点。

　　2. 话题类型：政府投资+教育。话题词：government；health care；taxpayers’ money。逻辑词汇：priority; other important

　　提纲

　　高分写作示范

　　The year 2020 witnesses the global contagion of coronavirus and some inappropriate strategies in the early stage of spread compounds a broader deterioration in the crisis, which has aroused people's thinking about the priority of government conducts. Some people argue that the government should give exclusive priority to issues related to health, while others believe that the government should take precedence over other crucial civil projects such as infrastructure and education.

　　Making health care as a priority investment can achieve both short-term and long-term returns. Especially in the case of the current epidemic, a large number of people in different countries are infected with the virus and urgently need treatments, by which I mean priority investment in health can ensure the stable supply of medical resources, and meanwhile vaccine research aiming at this virus can also be guaranteed, which is of great significance for the uninfected population too. Besides, from the government's point of view, money should be given priority to programs that will pay off in the long run, such as a plan to overhaul the nation's health care system to guarantee availability and affordability. Although with medical costs soaring, businesses may feel the weight of the recession, with this budget the government can make a historic commitment to comprehensive health care reform, which is a step that will not only make families healthier and companies more competitive but over the long term, it will also help the government bring down the deficit.

　　On the other hand, governments' investment should not be confined within the boundary of health care, and there do exist other projects that are of priority concern. For example, in 2020, China is carrying out comprehensive poverty alleviation work. Specifically, the government is giving priority to the financial and policy support to underprivileged families in deprived areas to help solve the bread-and-butter matters so as to enhance Chinese overall productivity and greatly narrow the gap between the rich and the poor. Besides, education, which also concerns the long-term development of the whole nation, should receive more funds as well. More talented students will be cultivated due to the abundance of governments' financial support, offering more intellectual support to the development of society. The above projects should be taken as the key consideration direction of the government in the investment process.

　　To summarize, it seems to me that just as a family has to make hard choices about where to spend and where to save, so do governments, and which project is more priority should depend on the specific national conditions at that time, as long as the government investment can ultimately improve the well-being and stability of taxpayers themselves.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Contagion 蔓延

　　Coronavirus 冠状病毒

　　Conduct 行为

　　Deterioration 恶化

　　exclusive  唯一的

　　Precedence 优先

　　Vaccine 疫苗

　　Deficit 赤字

　　Well-being 幸福感

　　Taxpayer 纳税人

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