9月5日雅思大作文7分范文及解析：反社会和冒犯他人的行为日益严重

　　9.5大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析：反社会和冒犯他人的行为日益严重，此次大作文为报告类大作文，社会类话题，那么遇到这样的题目应该怎么做答呢？这里我们为大家分享最新的写作分析，希望能够有效的帮助到大家！

　　Today there is a great increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce this problem?

　　题目来源：2020年9月5日大陆雅思大作文

　　题目大意

　　反社会和冒犯他人的行为日益严重。原因？办法？

　　思路解析

　　题目问的是原因和办法，文章结构就是逐一回应，一段专门写原因，一段专门写办法。

　　原因和办法无需数量对等，只要所提出的原因都能和后面的办法对应就可以。

　　审题，找出关键词

　　anti-social behaviors和lack of respect，注意在分析问题时，分别针对2个问题，找2个不同的原因，对anti-social behaviors这个抽象表述可以分解为具体的行为，再找出不同行为背后的共性，去找出一个具体的原因；分析办法时，办法要能真对前文的原因对症下药，办法也要具有普适性。

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　　高分写作示范

　　The past decades have witnessed an increasing trend towards offensive behaviors in society. While it is a complicated problem that should be attributed to multiple reasons, I tend to analyze the conundrum from educational perspective, and then recommend solutions accordingly.

　　Firstly, it is difficult for me to see the misbehavior as anything other than the result of insufficient school education on social awareness. Despite the tricky social problem includes diverse acts ranging from misuse of public space, disregard for community safety to offensive problems like fighting, all these problems share a common feature – the lack of social responsibility, which disciplines individuals to regulate their behaviors and emotions according to the social rules. By the same token, impoliteness is a symptom of problem to which I see inappropriate parenting as the answer – good manners are usually cultivated by role modelling of parents since preschool years.

　　According to the above reasoning, the solutions to improve personal behaviors should be also implemented from both aspects mentioned above. To curb anti-social acts, schools should add course of social responsibility to compulsory curricula, thus instilling social consciousness into young minds. Therefore, they can be taught to be contributive to society not only by academic expertise but also by good behaviors. Likewise, parents should set role models in home, for example by using polite words during conversations between family members, from which children can learn to be respectful to others.

　　I would conclude therefore, the anti-social behavior and disrespect are the result of insufficient education, and the problems can be tackled by both school and parents.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Conundrum  难题

　　Disregard  漠视

　　Parenting  家教

　　Role model  以身作则

　　Compulsory  必须的

　　Curriculum  课程

　　Instill 灌输