7.26雅思大作文7分范文及解析：有钱最重要的事

　　7.26雅思大作文7分范文及解析：有钱最重要的事   本题是一篇观点类大作文，社会类话题，拿到这个题目，你会怎么做呢？本文为大家整理分析写作思路，并附上高分范文！领取7月份雅思考试机经，可联系网站客服或扫码加小助手领取

　　Some people say that the most important thing about being rich is that it gives the opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　题目来源：2020年7月26日大陆雅思大作文

　　题目大意

　　有观点称财富最重要的好处是提供了一个帮助他人的机会。同意反对？

　　写作思路解析

　　➡️一般同意反对类的题目，都是一个比较武断的结论，选择反对的立场比较合

　　➡️这道题目的关键词是the most important thing about being rich, gives the opportunity to help other，两者之间形成了一个条件和结论的关系，即认为有钱才能有机会帮助他人，也提出一个问题，没有钱，是否就一定无法对他人提供帮助？

　　➡️根据以上分析，我们依然采取反驳的立场

　　➡️反驳的结构：主体段-1：站在出题者的角度，分析对方为何会这样想；主体段-2：针对对方的理论漏洞予以反驳，再给出我的理论，并予以证明。

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　　While it is assumed that the most important aspect of being wealthy is to provide an opportunity to help others, I would say it is simplistic to association charity exclusively with money – there are many alternative ways we can provide support to people in need.

　　It is not difficult to understand why economic resources are recognized as the most essential prerequisite to help others. Advocates presume that money is the panacea to deal with all tricky conditions in the world. The most frequently used method that charities use is financial donation. Whether their primary focus be hunger, poverty or medical treatment, their view is that they can best address problems if they control the finances. They have the notion that their identified solutions can best be addressed through their investment.

　　The problem with the above reasoning, in my view, is that the advocates of financial charity oversimplify people’s conundrums to purely materialistic plights, while ignoring other non-economic factors; rather, there are many pervasive conditions in life that cannot be addressed by money, such as loneliness among elder people or the angst experienced by many adolescents. It isn’t necessary for anyone to wait until becoming millionaires to offer help. By contrast, a visit or a heart-to-heart talk may make great changes to those suffering mental pains. Even for those living in under the poverty line, we can offer help simply by volunteering ourselves for community services, such as an unpaid doctor’s visit or free help with the plumbing.

　　It is my conclusion therefore, there is no connection between charity and being rich, any members of the society can make valuable contributions to those in need.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Prerequisite  前提

　　Donation  捐款

　　Conundrum / plight  困境

　　Adolescent angst  青春期焦虑

　　Heart-to-heart  交心的

　　Volunteer  参加志愿服务

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