雅思真题大作文【国际援助弱势群体】范文赏析！

　　雅思真题大作文【国际援助弱势群体】范文赏析!

　　I would discuss in this essay about the reasons why some are reluctant to offer their financial assistance to those foreign unemployed or homeless persons, and why I cannot reconcile myself with this opinion.

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　　Some may veto the policy of giving financial aids to the disadvantaged people in other countries. To them, the survival of the fittest is nature’s way of ruthlessly allowing the weaker ones to be eliminated by a particular society. It is true that natural selection also prevails in the human community, and that foreign aids often take a ton of money to alleviate the harsh living condition of people who are supposed to survive the hardship on their own, if at all. The money, however, would often be proved squandered during the process, since they cannot fundamentally resolve the poverty problems-those issues are often due to more deepened factors such as the social structures of a country’s welfare system. Besides, there is always no such a system showing transparently where those aids have gone, and whether they are spent financing those in need of money to sustain their living until they find a new job or to find them a place to stay. What the favored nation could provide is just vain figures to fulfill their accountability, and somehow, corruption always exists.

　　The relatively selfish thinking listed above would somewhat misguide us, and deprive us of the opportunity to find out the truth lying behind the fact. Humanity is, to some extent, what the human civilization has brought to us, and is also one of the most cherished natures that distinguish us from other animals. It forces us to rationally think about our situations and becomes the reason why we have been successfully overwhelming fierce surroundings and hardships that may have otherwise already defeated us millions of times under the concept of natural selection. The human nature also builds up our responsibilities of bonding human beings together as a unified species, within which there should be no discrimination nor prejudice misguiding us to help some but not others. A number of limited financial aids may not surmount obstacles in certain countries, but efforts or donations grouped would finally contribute to a certain level of poverty alleviation, or at least help those in disadvantage sustain for a while. There should be a necessity for the grants to be used as foreign aids to relieve the living pressure of people living in another country, but this only holds when their countries are not capable of dealing with homelessness or underemployment on their own.

　　In conclusion, I would much agree that money allocated to release the living pressures in other countries is necessary since I value humanity as the essence of our rational beings.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Be reluctant to 不愿意

　　Reconcile 和解

　　Veto 否绝

　　Ruthless 无情的