雅思G类大作文范文分析-工作生活平衡

　　雅思G类大作文范文分析-工作生活平衡   “花更多时间工作、更少时间在家的好坏”，是2020年2月其他考区出现的一道G类大作文题目。

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　　题目：These days people spend more and more time at work and less time at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

　　范文：

　　开头段：These days,most people find themselves working longer hours, cutting into their home time. Though this brings economic stability to a nation, it also deprives people of a rich personal life.

　　原文解析：开头段2句话，第1句改写题目，第2句回应写作任务，明确给出个人观点。

　　词汇英英对照：these days - nowadays，cutting into - taking away from，economic stability - strong economy，deprives - not having，rich personal life - fulfilling private life.

　　主体段1：The foundation of economic prosperity is a flourishing middle class unburdened by debts. A good example and counter-example of this can be seen in the changing fortunes of the American model of economics. In the 1950s the economy grew as people worked long hours and had large disposable incomes to feed back into the larger consumer economy by purchasing automobiles, houses, and luxuries. Since the economic crash of 2008, there have been fewer jobs to go around and most people make due with part-time labour. The result of an idle labour force was a long-lasting recession that has only abated in recent years as people began to work more.

　　原文解析：5句话的主体段。中心句给出明确的观点，第2句举例解释观点，第3句进一步把例子具体化，第4句从过去现在对比的角度继续举例解释观点，第5句说明结果，扣住题目。

　　词汇英英对照：unburdened by debts- not owing any money，changing fortunes -varying levels of money，American model of economics- capitalism，disposable incomes- money to spend，to go around- for all，make due- put up with，idle labour force- not having work，abated- stopped/slowed down。

　　主体段2: When people have less time to spend either on their hobbies or with their family, they rightly feel deprived. Every person should have time for both a fulfilling public and private life. Work constitutes the bulk of public service for most people and home life the private. Those with families feel particularly justifiable anger, which can boil over to general unhappiness or depression at best and neglect or abuse, at worst. Even the childless still have loved ones, hobbies, and a variety of other pursuits. At the end of their lives, everyone strives to be able to look back proudly on their career and fondly on their daily life.

　　原文解析：主体段6句话，中心句观点清晰，说明工作多在家少对人的负面影响；第2句开始解释中心句提出的idea，对应了中心句里的“time”、“hobbies or family”以及题目中的work；第3句继续解释中心句，说明公和私的关系；第4句从家庭的角度说明花太多时间工作让人不开心；第5句补充说即使没有孩子的人也需要私人时间，让论述更合理和充分；第6句总结了花时间在生活上的重要性。

　　词汇英英对照：fulfilling public and private life- happy at home and at work，bulk- most of，particularly justifiable -good reason for/to feel，boil over- have an impact on，abuse- hurt，at worst - in the worst situation，childless- no children，pursuits - hobbies，strives- tries to，look back proudly- feel good about your achievements，fondly -warmly.

　　结尾段：In my opinion, the tilting of work-life balance towards work is primarily a negative because it robs people of some of their most meaningful moments. People must individually find ways to not only survive but also prosper in a world where the private sphere shrinks with each passing year.

　　原文解析：结尾段2句话，1句重复个人观点，1句增加想法或补充细节以更充分地扣题。

　　词汇英英对照：tilting - unbalancing，robs - takes away，prosper-flourish，private sphere shrinks - less personal time，each passing year -every year.

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