A类雅思大作文：幼儿园和家人谁能更好照顾孩子 范文赏析

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　　题目：

　　Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide the best care for children, while others think other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　1.题目大意

　　一些在职的家长认为幼儿园可以给孩子提供最好的照顾，而另一些家长认为祖父母等家人才能照顾好孩子，问：双边讨论并给出自己观点?

　　2.写作思路

　　规划写作任务，论证过程分两个方面：

　　1. 关于家人照顾的优点：

　　1)可以给孩子提供熟悉的环境。

　　2) 家人的照顾更加细至，能顾及到孩子的身心需求。

　　2. 关于幼儿园的优点：

　　1) 要获取幼儿园的资质，首先要确保有足够的人员，教师和学生比需要满足一定的要求，也可以给孩子细致的照顾。

　　2) 幼儿园有资深专业的人员，既能很好的照顾到孩子的需求，又能进一步帮助开发孩子的智力和能力。

　　3) 幼儿园可以给孩子提供和其他孩子互相交流和学习的机会。

　　审题，找出关键词/限定词

　　the best way：最高级，一定要关注题干中的最高级词汇, 最高级词汇一般很难证明，你可以证明它好但很难证明最好。针对此类题型往往选择部分否定和补充其他。注意，此处最好否定best这一最高级的说法，而不是全盘否定完全无效。

　　childcare center：孩子年龄不大，所以对于套路性的知识学习部分不要谈及过深。毕竟太小的孩子不涉及太深奥的知识点。

　　3.提纲梳理

　　4.高分范文

　　Both positive and negative effects of childcare have proven to be long lasting. Professionally managed childcare centers, therefore, with their growth-oriented environment for children are believed to be the best option for working parents. Although there are some argument in favor of relative care, I personally, share the view that childcare center is definitely have more benefits.

　　Advocates of relative care believe that the home environment provides a safe place for children to relax. Also one-on-one care is taken for granted if a child is under the care of family members. In addition, family members are more sensitive to child'semotional and physical needs, and provide consistent and responsive care. Babies, in particular, need a lot of love and attention to thrive and do well. However, in order to get accredited, childcare centers have to follow all of state's regulations, including child-to-staff ratios, which means they are capable of smaller groups of children and more individual attention.

　　Rather, many parents like childcare centers because they offer formal, structuredenvironment. Many childcare centers are inspected for licensing purposes, in some cases caregivers are supervised (many classrooms have more than one teacher), and a director oversees the entire operation. Simultaneously, staff members at childcare centers are usually knowledgeable and well - trained in early childhood education so they know what to expect from the child developmentally and are able to nurture his growing skills accordingly. Besides, toddlers can also benefit from the opportunity to socialize with and learn from other children which they may not get to do as often or at all when a relative cares for the at home.

　　In conclusion, I agree that childcare centers can provide better care for children where relative care never manage to reach a comparable level, as studies have shown that children in quality childcare centers may even have an intellectual edge overthose in other kinds of care.

　　相关词汇

　　growth-oriented environment

　　is taken for granted

　　emotional and physical needs

　　consistent

　　responsive

　　accredit

　　structured

　　inspect

　　supervise

　　Simultaneously

　　reach a comparable level

　　have an intellectual edge over