雅思大作文开头怎么写?怎样才能轻松搞定雅思大作文的开头段呢?
2019-08-22 18:55:22来源:无锡环球教育作者: 景景阅读量:
据不完全统计,雅思大作文的写作过程中,考生花在开头段的时间占全部写作时间超过20%(别问我是怎么知道的,我都说了是不完全统计的)。完全原创吧,毫无头绪;照搬模板吧,怕被拆穿——考生们就只好在各种纠结中眼睁睁地看着时间一点点溜走。有些考生甚至可以花上十几分钟来纠结一个开头段。一方面是他们相信开头段必须让考官眼前一亮,所谓“凤头”,另一方面恐怕是他们真的不会写开头段。当然,万事开头难,这个我们都知道,那怎样才能轻松搞定雅思大作文的开头段呢?我们不妨从考官的范文里面来找找灵感。
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1. 古今对比
比如剑9 Test 1的范文开头段是这样的:
Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes.
考官显然是将过去和现在的不同现象进行了对比,这种古今对比的方法很适合含有某种新现象或新方法的题目,或者是探讨老事物是否过时的题目。考生完全可以顺着题目的思路先描述过去的现象(Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school),再引入现在的现象,同时自然地切入话题(but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists)。这一招特别好掌握,遇到合适的题目也特别容易套用,实乃居家旅行之必备。
参照这个例子,大家不妨来写写这个题目的开头段:Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
2. 移花接木
比如剑5 Test 2的范文开头段是这样的:
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.
这个开头段乍一看很长很复杂,很多考生立马表示臣妾做不到啊;其实,仔细一看,这个不过是题目(In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.)的改写罢了,各位看我加粗的地方,是不是一眼就看出来了,不过是雅思的万能招数——“同义替换”罢了。这招适合题目给出的是某个背景的阐述,那考生尽管放心大胆地进行同义替换好了,根本不用大费周章,便可移花接木,定叫考官看不出破绽。
3. 惜字如金——无招胜有招
比如剑7 Test 1的范文开头段是这样的:
The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.
这个开头段简直就是自杀式行为啊,直接用一句考生们事先背好的套句(... is a frequent topic of discussion)就给打发了。不过这也不失为一种思路啊,当实在憋不出来的时候,简单的引出题目就好啦。当然,这绝不代表各位考生以后可以背上两句套句就笃笃定定地区参加考试了,这种招数,大神用来叫无招胜有招,一般人用来气势肯定就稍显不足啦。这招呢,主要适合Discuss both views这种题目,来概括出真正的话题。并且一定记住:不要拖泥带水地写上有人认为和还有人认为,这样大师风范尽失,得不偿失啊。
好了,开头段的3招各位看懂了吗?师傅领进门,修行在个人。平时要勤加练习,考试就不用焦头烂额了。
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